Hi there!
Here I am ready to write a fantastic essay about …no idea
My first thing, I mean the first essay I wrote in this Blog had the purpose to get big reactions from everybody, but I recognize I didn’t like what happened. The reactions were criticizing my way of life, and excuse me, but this is not your business at all, you can criticize my essay but you are nobody to criticize me in my nose without asking you! No way!
The second one was a little thing without significance, and the third was very professional because I got information about war and I did it seriously. At least I did it more o less successfully
Then when the topic was “disasters” I tried to do it funny! But is not easy to do a funny thing in a foreign language…indeed it is always difficult to write funny things, but I don’t give up at all!
A friend of mine, professional writer, told me to do a thing like “mujeres al borde de un ataque de nervios” ="women on the verge of a nervous breakdown", and I told her that I had tried it in my first essay and it didn’t work….Or did it, my friends???
Besides it’s easier to do an essay like this…with bitterness.
Are you ready to understand that I can write about flying ants without having problems with insects?
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My dear Butterfly,
This is a game and you do not have to get upset because one said "this" or the other said "that". On the contrary it should encourage you to go to their blogs and give your own point of view in a nice and polite way.
Yes, there are a few mistakes here you could correct before I start writing some more comments on your language. (WROTE OK, but HAS. DID OK, but GET(?))
Here are some other comments:
-but THIS IS not your business at all,
-"WOMEN ON THE VERGE OF A NERVOUS BREAKDOWN"
-it’s easier to do (0) an essay like this…
-ready TO understand
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Perfect.I like people like you.you say everything you want hahaha.Fantastic welcome to the club.I must say that this has been very funny
It seems you are in the middle of a row. You want my advice...: ignore those who hurt you and be wise.
Hi Butterfly!
I have read your post and I must say…
FIRST - You deserve an apologize from me. When you wrote your first post, you were talking about your stressful way of life and I used the word “ILL” to define your state (the stress). I never tried to criticize your way of life, in fact, everybody is free to choose a way of life, and I only tried to tell you that a stressing life was not good for your health. Me, as “Il Kommentatore” have used some bitter ways to answer people in their blogs, but just looking for some polemic in the community, NEVER looking for problems and, of course, NEVER trying to insult anyone. If you have misunderstood me, JUST FORGIVE ME, because I never tried to hurt you (far from my intentions).
SECOND – I understand you very well about working on a post and, later on, discover that very few people let a comment. It’s something depressing. That´s why I created “Il Kommentatore”. You would be asking yourself “How did I know about the comment´s problem?”. Well, the blog experience is not something new for me. I’ve been into blogs for some years and I know the importance of comments.
Well, that’s all by now Butterfly. Please, continue writing because I like your blog.
Hi Butterfly!
I give you another piece of advice, be happy with whatever you do and choose whatever you want to do, after that all the other things from people, are not important. If you ask me, you should not be worried with comments from people who study English whith you and people who have more or less the same problems with you. Finally all of us have the same problems and want the same.
The important thing is, now I'm writting in english just to comunicate with you, and this is nice. Be happy! and enjoy yourself.
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